Thursday 28 March 2019

Argument of the Mysterious Gems



Point 1:
I think we shouldn't count the gems because they weren't there in the first place so we shouldn't count them.

Point 2:

We've had them for ages and now we should stop having them!


Point 3:
We might be off task and not earn them so we won't have a class celebration.


Point 4:

For the last gem we had to split it up into quarters to earn it that means it'll take ages to earn these two extras.


Point 5:

If we count them we might not have a party until Term 4!


Point 6:  

We've been good for so long and we deserve our reward!

1 comment:


  1. Kia ora, I am Taimana from Wainui Beach School.
    I really like that Oliver added different parts.
    I learnt that you we should cemp the gem’s.
    Maybe you could make the picture better to see.

    Mā te wā
    Taimana
    DONE
    Kia ora, I am Taimana from Wainui Beach School.
    I really like that Oliver added different parts.
    I learnt that you we should cemp the gem’s.
    Maybe you could make the picture better to see.

    Mā te wā
    Taimana
    DONE

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